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'''Welcome to ''Proteopedia''!''' We hope you will contribute much and well. | '''Welcome to ''Proteopedia''!''' We hope you will contribute much and well. | ||
You will probably want to read the [[Help:Contents|help pages]]. Again, welcome and have fun! [[User:Eran Hodis|Eran Hodis]] 18:12, 4 November 2008 (IST) | You will probably want to read the [[Help:Contents|help pages]]. Again, welcome and have fun! [[User:Eran Hodis|Eran Hodis]] 18:12, 4 November 2008 (IST) | ||
== Comments on your Outline == | |||
Assignment 4: IIB: Tertiary Structure: Map polar/nonpolar or charged and uncharged regions of GS monomers. Use space filling model. Map where polar and nonpolar residues are located in the protein. Comment on significance.[5]<br/> | |||
1. Your outline is a very good start, you have all the major points. <br/> | |||
2. But it does suffer from usage and grammar error, which makes it difficult to read. <br/> | |||
3. You have the wrong Glutamine Synthetase: the version you have is human you must use the Salmonella version. Please replace the applet. <br/> | |||
4. The first paragraph is not necessary. You can assume the readers know about the stuff you mention in the first paragraph. <br/> | |||
5. You may want to start with the sentences of the final paragraph as your introductory paragraph. <br/> | |||
6. I commend you for commenting on significance; I was a bit unclear as to what I meant, and you did a good job. I did not expect a lesson on protein folding. I was not sure what I wanted in regard to significance. <br/> | |||
7. We need to schedule a time to go over your final draft to correct errors to ensure a reasonable grade. <br/> | |||
Grade: 8/9<br/><br/> | |||
Dr. Gluick | |||
